Talk:Are You Okay?

Okay, I've some constructive criticism. I liked it, a lot. It's an original idea, and one you put to use very well. Just one thing - it all seems very rushed. For example "But the knights escaped". That raises a few questions: Where did they escape to? Why did they escape? Aren't they supposed to save the people? Did anyone die while they were escaping? When did they escape? Did they at least try to escape? What happened to the daughters? Coroxn 20:09, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * How did they escape?
 * Did the king tell the to escape?