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I regret to inform you that it was Wikia's automated idiocy and not my conscious decision to welcome you. I have not truely used this wiki in quite a while. Smith. 06:15, May 4, 2010 (UTC) Hey there! I'm Berus, as you can probably see, and I am a member who was fairly active in the past but has recently dropped off due to lack of interest. However, I'm thinking I might want to get back into the RuneScape Fiction business, if you're interested in making a serial together?

I'm wanting to take you up on your offer of co-writing a serial. I've noticed your serial, and it is pretty epicly written in my opinion (if a little KH inspired ;) ). You can look at my other attempted serial, The Story of a Mage, or one of my other articles to see what kind of a writer I am and decide if you're interested as well.

If you do take me up on the offer we need to decide what the serial will be about and recruit other writers (more writers = more creative story?). It needs to be a pretty broad topic and I like to tie in characters and events from RuneScape itself.

Alright, if you're interested, reply back. Thank you very much for your time!

--Berus 17:06, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

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Uuuummmm... did you get the pictures of the cavern wyvern and soulless from Harry Potter but just made little changes because the images look really familiar from the movies. 139Acorn 01:33, May 7, 2010 (UTC)139Acorn ==UnEx Situation Edit== Just follow what everyone else did.

-Runeon12 ==Story Serial Project, From Berus Again =P Edit== Now it is I who must apologize for being late, ten days late in fact. =( Stupid math finals. Oh well. I think I want to make a serial project called Quests of RuneScape involving quests of RuneScape with perhaps a little bit of difference in the storylines. For example, one could put a villain behind the plot of Demon Slayer and after the completion of that quest chase the villain down and end them.

This could lead to several long and interesting storylines all going at once with different heroes for every author. Each author would make their own hero or heroes and go about solving a several quests that lead into each other and end up solving some Master Plot, as decided by the individual author.

This may be a little confusing due to my wording and lack of ability to get my ideas out in a few simple paragraphs. =( However, I would love to hear back from you on this idea ASAP! =D

Of course, the first season would be headed by you and I.

--Berus 19:36, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I see where some problems may lie, so we may need to make a test run first. What are a couple of very common quests that are connected and can have some plot behind them? Demon Slayer seems to be a pretty good one. =) Alrighties, awaiting your reply.

--Berus 21:19, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's a very good idea! I've always wondered what happened with that guy after the potion was ruined. :(! That one should definitely go in. We could also do the Rune Mysteries quest at some point, with the villains being some rival mages trying to take the rune ore stores for themselves.

--Berus 21:38, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Dragon Slayer is definitely the one I want to use for season one. We could really have three separate storylines that start together and then merge at the end to fight the dragon. Do you know of a third RSFF Wikian that would be interested to take the third part? =) Okay, I'll be back in about 10 minutes to see your reply.

--Berus 21:49, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I've seen Mec around and Karshi is definitely a good writer. Perhaps we could ask Karshi to fill the part of the third writer and Mec could be asked to co-write with each of us to fill the role of the villain, or a strange and sometimes unwanted sidekick, in some cases to make the story a little more creatively interesting? I would love to see what he can do with that mad wizard. :D

Oh, and thank you very much for the comment on TSoaM. =)

--Berus 22:05, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Superscientist is another I would like to have as a co-writer and sometimes full on. He is very excellent with coming up with dungeons themselves, so perhaps he could assist us in fleshing out the mazes and Elvarg's lair?

--Berus 22:07, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

No problem! I'll be awaiting your reply tomorrow. =) See you then!

--Berus 22:11, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I love almost all of the plot. However, I don't think Zaros should be behind it. Really, we don't know who's side Zaros is really on or if he was a good guy or a bad guy. In fact, a line of quests in RuneScape are about RELEASING him and the character doesn't seem much opposed to that prospect. Perhaps the main enemy behind it could be an Arch-Demon. Those are apparently powerful as one of Zamorak's had strength so great it was only defeated by a near invincible Mahjarrat. A demon breaking through the abyss to get to Gielinor would definitely open up some major plotlines.

Or better yet, as Lucien is being chosen by Jagex to be their main villain, could he be behind this plot as well? I know you said you don't want an elderly evil magician but technically Lucien is not so. He is a powerful, and even more so after he grabs the Staff of Armadyl (season 2?), and he has connections spanning all of Gielinor. He could call everyone from the Black Knights to fellow Mahjarrat to assist him in his plans.

As for the sword and the potion, how do you think those might tie in to other quests? I know I'm a little weird for saying that but I'd love include as much of "Real RS" as possible. The Magical Sword could be Excalibur from the Camelot series quests but what could the potion be?

Also, I would like to ask your suggestions for where your three suggested writes could fit in. Superscientist is an excellent dungeon and trap maker so he would be superb to help with the background, but he also has a good hand at writing. Mec should definitely be a co-writer for all of us to add some spice to some of our chapters while Karshi would make a really good third writer or co-writer. So should Superscientist or Karshi be the third writer and if tis Superscientist do we want Karshi as a co-writer?

Thank you very much for all of the effort you are putting in to this.

--Berus 16:16, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, and what do you think of the plot ideas?

--Berus 16:24, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just want to say that is a completely EPIC idea. =)! That's definitely going to be our plotline. Might I suggest that the godweapon the heroes go for is the God Sword? Its supposed to be the most powerful weapon in all of Gielinor. Anyway, if you can suggest a name I can start up the page and invite the others. I'm not too good with names. (Berus? Seriously?) =P After we get the page started I'll invite the other guys and we can set up the chapters. Again, thanks for all of your effort and enthusiasm! :D

--Berus 17:47, May 22, 2010 (UTC) ==Signature test Edit== Coroxn 17:20, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Coroxn 17:21, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Coroxn 17:25, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Coroxn Talk 21:20, May 27, 2010 (UTC) ==Signature Edit== Alright, right under the search bar you see those little links?

Special Pages -> Preferences -> Check the Custom Signature Box -> Put in the image(s) and text. :)

Speaking of that, I need to work on my own signature. :P

--Berus 19:31, May 27, 2010 (UTC) ==Serial Project Cont. and DONE Edit== First of all, I just want to say LAWL@MYNEWSIG. (its huge =])

Also, please review my votes and tell me if it is actually individual voting rather than a contest? If so I will change my vote on yours to support. =)

Concerning the Serial, I'll have pages up for my characters as soon as possible (I have to mow the lawn tomorrow so I'll work on it some tonight and tomorrow) but I believe I'm going to use a Bard (Robbing RuneScape of one of its many musicians), steal one of the Coal Rocks members (that article is free to edit and I have confirmation from Fegaxeyl to use them), and make the son of the Silverlight guy as well (to give demon slayer a little bit more story).

Also, would you please pick a name and start the article? I can do most of the general management seeing as you have pretty much built up the plot yourself. I gotta do something you know? For the name itself, seeing as you want to put across that they are doing it for all different reasons, perhaps it could be "The Epic of Gielinor" seeing as the epics from the past have had heroes both good and bad?

Anyway, I also want to thank you for being such a great help to this Wiki as well as for being such an awesome guy. BERUS - OUT

-- 01:34, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Also, I am making up a challenge for myself and other called Jack of all Articles, which is making an article for every single major category. Can you look at my list and put on my talk page the categories I missed? Okay! Thanks! Bye!



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Thanks! =) ==Character Beginnings Edit== I suggest for us to start off the Serial by doing "Character Beginnings." This would just be a mini-volume that helps introduce each character into the world. Also, the introductions could all meet up with the return of Delrith the Demon. Sound good? =) Then again, I only have to write three of them to your five. >=)

--PAT 02:47, May 30, 2010 (UTC) ==Re: The Picture Of Your RuneScape Avatar? Edit== At first, you have to know, how to take screenshots. Just press the "Print screen" key, which is near the "F12" key. i made an image for you, so you can better see where it is. (highligthed in red).

Afterwards, use a graphic-program (I use Photoshops, but if you do not have Photoshop, use Gimp. It is free and good). Paste the image (shortcut is "crtl" + "v"). I suggest that you turn of your anti-aliasing, else it will be difficult to cut out your character. Also use the equipment-window to get a perfect position of your character. Afterwards, save it as a PNG-file and upload it. If it is just for your userpage, don't use the wikia-uploading feature. (I did that once, and it got removed). I suggest you use http://imageshack.us/, afterwards paste the image URL into your article. Note that the URL should end with png. Note that the "print screen" key may be somewhere else if you use a laptop. This sort of making a screen does not work on Macs. If you use a Mac, look here:http://guides.macrumors.com/Taking_Screenshots_in_Mac_OS_X If you have further questions, just ask me. — 12:55, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * I am using a Laptop too. My "Print screen" key (although it is called "Druck S-Abf because I use a German language keypad) is still near the F12. Maybe it is next to the key where you activate your Num-pad. I hoped I could help you out.
 * — 15:50, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

==Discontinued Story SerialsEdit== This concerns the category you created: What makes you assume they are discontinued? Did you ask the authors for permission? 4ndrepd Talk 2 me Contribs Streets of Varrock, the epic series! 15:33, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. ok then, I guess... 4ndrepd Talk 2 me Contribs Streets of Varrock, the epic series! 17:31, June 3, 2010 (UTC) ==Template Edit== Hey, sorry I didn't reply, my internet was out =S

It'd be great if you could make the template, i have no idea how to xD

- Lomandro ==Underground Explorers Edit== Sorry, you're going to have to hold on because I have to study for my school's final exams this week and next week. It may be until July until I announce winners. Sorry.

-Runeon12 ==Caved Wayvern Edit== Ok, man really? I was watching Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets today.. and noticed that your Caved Wayvern picture is an edit of that! Lol, but good edit.

71.111.26.194 00:33, September 2, 2010 (UTC)Nz is nice ==RE: Bureaucracy Edit== I've granted administrative and bureaucratic rights to both you and Howiter. Powers you now have include: If you have any questions about your powers or how to use them, feel free to ask me. Chiafriend1203:23, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ability to delete and restore of pages and files
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Heyy Edit
Sorry, I've had some major family problems :\

I think I'm coming back to this wiki though :)

--Berus

Actually that all sounds pretty good. :)

How about we get him over and try it out? I do wonder how the three parties gather together and get the keys though; they would have to know each other or special circumstances be involved.

--Berus ==Heroes of Gielinor Edit== One thing I want to request;

Is it possible that, using the Demo on RuneScape, we could get screenshots of all of the characters using the different clothing combinations? For example, my Ehdwin Prysin and Vereor Magus characters. Of course, if the person preferred the use of different clothes found in RuneScape, obstacles could be bypassed by using the Orb of Oculus to get a good screenie.

I was just thinking if we could get one of every character, the heroes at least, we could combine them as if they were standing side by side and make it our opening picture.

If this idea sounds good, send me a message, if it doesn't, send one anyway!

Berus 03:03, September 24, 2010 (UTC) ==Your idea Edit== Seems good, but before we do things like that, I think we should focus on getting our first issues out there.

After we have all completed our Origin stories, we'll think how they will meet. And after the meeting of our parties, things like that can be easily arranged. ==Forums Edit== We got a new forum, as says in the bannar thingy, and front page.

Link is here: http://runescapefanfic.englishboards.com/forum.htm

Hope you can sign up :3

~Antelope/Valencia~ 'Bringing revenge to others' | Page * Talk * Support | 02:20, November 6, 2010 (UTC) ==Your writings Edit== I <3 your stories!

You should write lores about fake NPCS and stuff. I mean, your writing is fantastic.

Keep it up!

~Antelope/Valencia~ 'Bringing revenge to others' | Page * Talk * Support | 03:04, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

Hi there!!! I'm finally deciding the winners' of my awards for the Underground Explorers contest! You've won two!

1st Place!Added by Runeon12Most Original!Added by Runeon12

==FORUMS Edit== Hang out on there sometimes? They have a cbox thing where we can chat about our prized HOG. :)

--=) 00:27, November 15, 2010 (UTC) ==Interview Edit== YES! It would be an honor to be interviewed! ==Re: Quote Edit== Where do you want me to place it, Mr. Coxron sir?

I wil try to find one of the quotes from my quests.

~Antelope/Valencia~ 'Bringing revenge to others' | Page * Talk * Support | 19:41, November 20, 2010 (UTC) ==Re:Quote/Berus Edit== Well, I might have some good quotes.

As you miiiight know, I'm working on Rose of the Elders, which is the sequel to Another Mahjarrat. Its not completed yet, but I've written a fair portion of it in good old Microsoft Word and I'd like to use a quote from there, if that's okay? Its not exactly on the Wiki just yet but it will be hopefully soonish.

Anyway, the quote is "Striking an enemy with fear isn't near as effective as striking them with a good hard sword." - Sir Silverblade, Rose of the Elders(Part 2 of the Summoner of Titans TBA series)

Second: "Yes, actually, every time I swing my sword it cuts my hand open. I have to wear gloves to prevent this! That, and it doesn't cut the enemy like everyone else's. It just kind of smacks them like a club. Is my sword defective or something? Or am I doing it wrong?" - Trainee, Colonizing (Part 2 of the New World quest series)

I don't have any more yet; Heroes Of Gielinor will be my first Serial on this wiki with major dialogue involved.

Anyway, this sounds pretty interesting! Hope I helped a little. :)

--=) 20:15, November 20, 2010 (UTC)

Here's a few I got of Satoko:

And an unreleased quote of Rika: But you can choose either of the 2.

~Antelope/Valencia~ 'Bringing revenge to others' | Page * Talk * Support | 20:17, November 20, 2010 (UTC) ==RE: Quotes (Superscientist) Edit== I found a few, don't whether you'd want them or not but here they are: There you go Superscientist 11:27, November 21, 2010 (UTC) ==Heroes Of Gielinor, third writer? Edit== I talked to Berus on the forums, and he asked me if I could join Heroes of Gielinor. :)
 * Master Daitoku: "Our Gods, unlike yours, have existed in harmony since the creation of the Universe." or "There has been and always will be peace in the East."
 * Mistress Ama: "Believe me ... your name will go down in history as the greatest hero since Tukani himself!"
 * Arianwyn: "A fell beast from the west, corrupted by dark sorcery and twisted by the Dark Lord himself."
 * K'Chunk: "Wat's dat you say funny little white t'ing? I likes you. I likes you a lot."
 * Wu Xing: "This is the infamous Sorcerors' Tower, the main centre of magical learning in all of the Eastern Realms."

FEARTHEWAFFLE 20:26, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I looked at his The Enforcer and I was mightily impressed. Look it over and tell me what you think? I think he'd make a good third writer, in any case, and three storylines arching together is more interesting than two. :P

--   20:40, November 25, 2010 (UTC) ==Banner Edit== Hi, Coroxn

Honestly the Banner right now doesn't look really good despite the fact that I made it anyway, so I made another higher quality one. Its about the same as the one before but i removed the texture design and added a 'Clearer' effect to it. Hope you like it:



Thanks,

Tabez 12:50, November 27, 2010 (UTC) ==HOG Writer Userboxes! Edit== I was bored and didn't feel like writing, so I made a HOG Writer Userbox. If you wanna add it to your page its rightHERE and here and there and maybe even over there!

So yeah, I'm working on my first one, which I've tentatively named Corner of Varrock. Its in poor condition right now and the ending is rather rushed, but I'm in the revising and editing stage. If you look at the history for Story of a Mage's articles, you'll see that they almost double in length after I edit 'em, so don't count me out on it yet!

Oh yeah, and on the subject of userboxes, I thinking of making Ehdwin, Vereor, Markus, Cara, etc userboxes to put on each chapter that features them. Does that sound like a good idea? Yay or nay it!

Alright, thanks for your time!

--  00:32, December 2, 2010 (UTC) ==Boxes! Edit== Alright, here they are, not templated yet though. Look at them and tell me any color changes you'd like made. :) SS and Elchris was on there ages ago.
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Berus I kept a promise that I was gonna make him admin when I first got my powers.

~Antelope/Valencia~ 'Hail the Duchess!/Hail Empress Valencia, the Young Queen!' | Page * Talk * Support | 00:28, December 16, 2010 (UTC) ==RE: Interview Edit== Sure, go ahead. I assume this will be January's interview seeing as there's already one up for December? ==Heroes of Gielinor Edit== I'm rather dissatisfied with a couple of my characters and the fact that my group has only one gender. I'm thinking of changing them up a bit, which involves writing a new origin story for one of them.

So, how much do you like Heroes Of Gielinor, and are we going to continue the project?

That's all I wanted, thanks

Berus the Bard 03:14, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I understand the whole Christmas thing. I might be a little slow right now as well; I'm skilling hardcore in an attempt to take advantage of the foodrise before it all levels out again. :P Oh Jagex, didn't you know even suggesting the old Wilderness could return would spawn a massive number of would-be PKers stocking up for the longhaul?

Anyway, I'm keeping Ehdwin, Vereor, and Icarus but scrapping Falastur and Thorkal. I haven't decided what I'm going to do exactly with the open Falastur spot but I will have to fill it as he is the main group ranger (and the one who was most talkative). Thorkal will be replaced by a veteran warrior (of an undecided class) I'm nick-naming "The Cripple" who was Dungeoneering with a powerful party of adventurers until they bit off more than they could chew. He was the only survivor and bears a limp alongside several other ailments (which I haven't decided yet).

Sorry, didn't mean to bore you! Berus - out.

Berus the Bard ==Heroes Of Gielinor Edit== Hey! I'm sort of quitting the wiki except for perhaps Heroes Of Gielinor, if you'd like to continue that! I'm sort of gathering ideas for it of late, unintentionally of course, and I think I've got some good ones for the final two character slots!

So yeah, if you're really interested in continuing Heroes Of Gielinor, leave me a message!

Berus - Talk ==Re: 'ply Edit== I'll be partially¨ staying just for the express purpose of Heroes Of Gielinor. ;) I may get a slow start, however, so don't be too angry with me!

My final two characters will be I'm gonna get to work eliminating Falastur and Thorkal and writing new Origin Stories for my two characters. So yeah...
 * the Rogue Knight from the Conquest section of Mobilising Armies (who is never seen and only known because he is sequestered away in his castle)
 * and an Elven Ranger who makes use of Crystal Seeds, which transform into into the Crystal Bow and Crystal Armor upon command. (yeah, this is actually in the game o_O)

Peace!

Berus - Talk