User talk:The evil dude

Wheres my talk gone? We're all doomed! Send the missiles and sound the sirens!

Not really, I just archived. See here.

Saltius space race
Evil Dude,

Although I like the idea, there are a few flaws in the idea of the first Gielinorian vessel in space. So I'm afraid your plan is shot full of holes there. BUT your idea could work if: Hope you use these tips!
 * In chapter 7 of VEW 1 the Prototype mentions his Global Positioning Satellite is offline. This satellite could only operate from space. (The Signal is coming from Lunica, ToaBionicle)
 * Episode 10 of TW, "Junkyard", has a space station that has been flying around for several years. This would imply that not only has it been up for at least four years it also means that there would be manned space flights to construct it and several others well before when it was constructed. And keeping with the GDG's vital public opinion policy they would have accelerated extragielinorian knowledge vastly.
 * It is the first commercial space race (so different organisations are doing it for a profit),
 * It is a tourism-based space race,
 * It is a power-based space race (with different factions (ie White Knights, Black Knights etc.) vying to be the first in space for militaristic gain).

--Fegaxeyl 06:44, 17 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Actually, I was inteding for the GDG to be almost non-existent in VEW 2, other than providing backstories and to have characters mention them. But this doesn't mean they can't be used - perhaps if someone asked nicely maybe they might be able to use them...

--Fegaxeyl 08:43, 17 May 2008 (UTC)

Re:Finalé
I am beginning to plan the episodes in my head.

So far Episode 19 will reveal the truth about Lathas. It will revolve around him and his plans as well as the rest of the episode being used to tie up any plot lines needed to be fixed. How would you feel about the Socialists discovering the truth as well as Tony, so they could perhaps team up for the battle. Tarqinder, Mark, Veedi, Jake, Norbert and the Wizards will launch an assault on Ardougne Palace using magic and Tarqinder's strength. I'm considering killing off a character, but I'm not sure who yet. Drancus (Ugozima's character) is already in Ardougne, and will find out the truth by investigating about the murder of his loved one. Bruce Brysworth (Gielinorverse version) will also be at Ardougne by either episode 17/18 or possibly 19. I intend on Bruce teaming up with Dalmius who was head of the Slayers' Union. Will Farrel and Darako be going to Ardougne? Maybe they could use the battle to make up for their crimes committed. What about the General? And I also need to know if you'll be killing any of your characters off. Mr. Garrison 18:50, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, the plan was that we'd all have our characters meet up. Will you be needing Ep 19 to tie up your arc? Mr. Garrison 15:59, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

New Entry
Please read my new spoiler post, Filled with Zamorackians, Robots and choices. There's a link in my siggy.

Sure, and I will have him death threat them in the next episode with a bit of a flashback sequence. Mr. Garrison 16:22, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

Please change the line where Ardougne being the source of problem is mentioned, I wish for it to be revealed in Ugozima's chapter as it is shown in full. Plus please do not have Catherby destroyed because I already have a story which is set there. Mr. Garrison 16:26, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

Thanks, and Facing the Facts was a good chapter. Mr. Garrison 16:19, 22 May 2008 (UTC)

So the prototype weapon is a gun? This kinda breaks the continuity of RuneScape which is a rule for the series, could you change it to powerful sword? Mr. Garrison 16:52, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

I see, but no more things that don't exist in RuneScape, like toilet and alarm in Consuming, Confusing, I know it's annoying but it makes the series more realistic in terms of continuity with the game. Mr. Garrison 18:20, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Days of Destruction
Evil Dude,

Ooh, if you've read that series of books (which I haven't) have you read Philip Pullman's His Dark Materials Trilogy? You'll see it's in my recommended books, but I can't stress how great it is! If you have, it'll give us something to talk about (and if not, well, read it anyway if you want to understand where I will get some of my future plotlines...)

--Fegaxeyl 10:36, 25 May 2008 (UTC)




 * I watched it today too! 3:20pm - I just got back from watching it about half an hour ago! Yeah, it's damn good, although perhaps a teeny bit far-fetched (but then again, aren't all the films?) I was thinking that with all the alien stuff it existed in a sort of parallel universe to the normal Indy timeline. Oh, and before you go, I'll hint at why I mentioned His Dark Materials - I'm currently working on a story with an alternate Drauss who goes through the Multiverse collecting allies to launch an assault on the God Plain.

--Fegaxeyl 18:18, 25 May 2008 (UTC)


 * The multiverse is a theory of countless parallel universes existing together, almost as one universe, hence a multiverse. I think, anyway - Wikipedia it to check. And with that parallel Angeror? Hmm, not bad, but please don't make him a central character. Some questions - will he be in Xenomorph form? Will he be allied or against the HuCDomFor? I suppose with his raw chaotic energy he could be used as a gigantic power source (although with their universe-spanning technology the HuCs could probably just siphon all the energy they need from novae or the big bang.

--Fegaxeyl 18:58, 25 May 2008 (UTC)

Episode 20
I'm introducing Lathas in that one as well, so yeah everyone could meet up and you're welcome to write a scene with the characters meeting Tarqinder, plus I thought you might want to write out the meeting between the Socialists and Lathas, and sorry I was so bothering earlier, I've got a lot of bother at South Park Wiki with a load of vandals and sock puppets, but wikia central should sort it soon. For 20 (it's called "The Tyrant") I plan on a good long revelation about Lathas' insane plan(s) which will be almost identical to the ones I mentioned earlier, but with a few changes. I might also have him make mentions about certain things in his plan like declaring war on TzHaar and turning Varrock into a military base for his paladins (ie how his changes would affect each character). Mr. Garrison 18:49, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

I think we'd better wait for Fegaxeyl to finish his capters first, so Bruce can show up, plus we don't want to get too ahead. Mr. Garrison 19:06, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

who am i
i am a socker on rs wiki. i was a normal user who made edits and socialized with the community but i knew that i would have to leave the wiki since it is pointless. a few days after making my account i started creating sockpuppets. all but totalrune (my stupid lil bro vandalizing, destorywikis, my lil bro, and jimihendrixowns, a private story, listed on sannse's checkuser are me. totalrune is not the real total rune, he was just a prank played by my stupid lil bro. i made one sock with an urdu username, and total rune came back a few days after and said i should be banned for having a name with foreign letters. he turned out to be racist against Muslims, and i am a Muslim, and i started defending my religion. for the rest of the day it was back and forth arguing and dtm had to come along and ban me for not having an English username even though everyone could copy paste my name. i made about one flame remark that whole day and never vandalized once in all my time at the wiki. he only banned me for that stupid reason. i used socks to get people to fight for unbanning that account. i did get unbanned but then i realized that i could take advantage of total rune and dtm to get me banned infinitely. i put a post on dtm's talk page and signed it with my main sock and then changed the signature to the urdu username. i knew they would request a checkuser and i knew i would get banned. however, the stupid admins are trying to hide the real story. they are making everyone think that i was any old sockpuppeteer. i was someone who only wanted to be remembered for defending my faith, Islam. the media is putting a wrong impression on Islam, even though there are extremists for every religion. i told the truth and once it was done i revealed that i was a sockpuppeteer by making that 'mistake' on dtm's talk page. i thought i would not need to return to the wiki, but it appears i do since people are acting just like the media, hiding everything to make one group, or person in this case, look bad. i thought that the admins were better people. but it appears they are just like the regular people in this world. ilyas and chia are the only active admins i have respect for. the rest i could care less about. in a nutshell, i wanted to be remembered for defending my religion, purposely got banned to ensure that i would be put on category:banned users, and now i am explaining the true story, which everyone is covering. it seems like you will turn the same. but i cannot be sure yet. Thisguyown 01:23, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
 * P.S. put your reply on thisguyown's rsffw talk page to make it easier to find. Thisguyown 01:23, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
 * kk its all good. Thisguyown 19:17, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
 * i saw ur post on fegayxel's (sp?) talk page. it's not my life story, its my wiki story. Jimihendrixowns 20:12, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
 * oops my cousin was logged on and i didnt notice. yeah jimi isnt a sockpuppet. its a long and private story but he isnt. believe me. Thisguyown 20:14, 28 May 2008 (UTC)

Tyrannical Thursday pointer
Evil Dude,

The Harbringer was said to be capable of transforming into a starfighter. Very cool, but generally in most sci-fi categories a starfighter would be far smaller and piloted by one or two individuals. The description of the Harbringer makes me think it would be more of a Frigate or a Destroyer in space vessel terms. What was the guy in the previous message on about?

--Fegaxeyl 17:39, 28 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Look in the gap between the signature in the message above Fegaxeyl 17:42, 28 May 2008 (UTC)

Sure
Hi! I'm back off my hol's. I do want you to use the Immortals reference, maybe you could do it like a "Bad Wolf" thing.

P.S. Cool trailer for the end of the series. I didn't sea any clips from "Midnight". Thisguyowns? ain't he Total Rune?

Wait a second... ok, move the "Bad Wolf" idea bit to refer to Torchwood, but yes, use the reference.

The Tyrant
In this episode I've had Lathas' servant mention the "gun" plot to Lathas. I thought it would be a reason for him to go against the Socialists even more, if he thought that they were experimenting with gunpowder and lava and plenty of other things he sees as a threat. I also put that monarchs across the worlds know of the Ark, I thought it could be like a rumour going around the monarchies which no one (but the insane Lathas) actually believes. Lathas calls it TzHaar Seers looking through hallucinations and taking notes (and copying prototypes which would explain the gun). This wouldn't register the Ark as not real or just plain rubbish, but it would add to the recurring element of being a Seer (Ugozima's character is a Seer and I'd like to develop more on the Ark in my Karamja story arc in Volume 2). The Ark could be slightly like what the heart of the TARDIS is in terms of visuals, and TzHaar High Priests would watch it and take notes on what they see but without items time travelling through it. How do you see the Ark as, seeing as you created it, and if you want me to remove and/or change my explanation of it in the story then please tell me, and the part for where the Socialists meet with Lathas can be written as soon as you want. Mr. Garrison 20:37, 31 May 2008 (UTC)

Okay, and when you write the scenes with Lathas there's only one guideline for him - he must seem insane! The villains in other series: Angeror (TF), Zell (TW), Drakan (MT) are all big evil guys who are all very calm and manipulative, so Lathas is designed to be the wiki's first (I think) insane villain. I'm gonna put VE2 up soon but I can't think of any names, so far I've got Voyage to the Unknown, Voyage into Peril and Voyage Into Apocalypse. If I'm a bit inactive these next few days its down to me trying to make about 5 million coins on RuneScape for all the items I missed out when rushing to 70 construction and also finishing off a few pages I started on my new wiki on The Apprentice. Mr. Garrison 20:56, 31 May 2008 (UTC)

Your question
Evil Dude,

I saw you asked Mr. Garrison about naming VEW 2 something else. If you look through his archive 1 somewhere in there will be a group of names I suggested to him (and somewhere in my archive will be the ones he liked).

By the way, I'm back!

--Fegaxeyl 17:40, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

Socialists
Evil Dude,

I've been meaning to ask you this for a while - do you know exactly what a socialist is? (I've noticed already that it has references to the Nazi party/Gestapo, and I must say that that's quite clever.) I'm asking you as a test, because really the concept of socialist you have is quite different to what a socialist/socialist movement actually is. Well, seeyas!

--Fegaxeyl 08:28, 7 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Well, not utterly a communist, but left wing nonetheless. Well done! You've completed the test! Well, I haven't got much to do right now on the wiki... perhaps you could think of something that I should work on?

--Fegaxeyl 10:43, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

Of course
But I don't want that to actually happen because I've got plenty of story arcs for them already planned next season. I was hoping they would all get along as it came to battle so Tarqinder would actually be sad when Farrell (correct me if I'm wrong) dies. Is Farrell the only one you intend on killing? Mr. Garrison 10:39, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

How do you mean rob? If you mean strip them of everything then it's a no because then they'll just look stupid for much of the episode. If you mean money then that's ok, but how would it work out? Surely Tarqinder wouldn't stand back and be robbed with a great big sword in his hand? Mr. Garrison 12:57, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

My bad, I thought you meant a robbery/hostage situation. Mr. Garrison 15:28, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

At last
Voyage Into Apocalypse is here. Mr. Garrison 21:22, 14 June 2008 (UTC)

Chapter 8 v. Chapter 9
Evil Dude,

If you've read Chapter 9 (that was posted minutes after chapter 8) you'll see that there are a few inconsistencies - well, on major one, regarding having Drauss joining the space launch. Could you please retcon these into correction? Sorry, but I was writing it on Word, as my writing on the wiki gets extremely laggy after a few paragraphs (so the story would be difficult to type). Thanks"

--Fegaxeyl 16:19, 16 June 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks for that. And anyway, plans do change. Speaking of which, did you know the Kairie-Drauss love story was planned long before Time Fractures? It was in fact going to be one of my plots for Souls of the Damned - the Prodigies stay in Hell and Drauss and Kairie develop their love then. However, Kairie is killed/mortally wounded and Drauss pleads with Angeror to bring her back to life... But as you can see the plot went a completely differet way and this story didn't emerge until well into Time Fractures.

--Fegaxeyl 17:47, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

I was looking at Voyage into Apocalypse (film) and I noted you've got Simon Cowell as Saltius. Yes, they both are evil, but personally I think that Simon Pegg would be much better for the role (that's how I imagine him anyway, akin to The Editor from the Long Game). I'm not in anyway pressuring you to change this, but it seems much more appropriate. And yes, he already is The Legend, but for all the reasons I gave above... in conclusion: It's your choice.

--Fegaxeyl 18:20, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

Scarecrow
'''Warning, this post contains spoilers. I intend only for The Evil Dude to read this.'''

In your post, you mentioned the scare-crow attempting to go to the island. The shard of Angeror's soul has fallen into the mind of Sparticus, and will revel it-self in my finale. Gorak, being so powerful, will have alot more will-power for the shard to use than the Scare-crow.

I will reveal the ZTI in a couple of chapters time. With the portals, easy transport (maybe secret meetings) could occour between the two. (oh god, I'm talking about talking to a scare-crow).

Also, I would like to ask you for some ideas. Are there any names you could come up with for the Guardian?

Er.. It's spelt Spartacus? Yes, I was aiming for something like that. I don't like my names to sound to sound too alien. I did use Gorak, which is a bit weird. And, may i ask, How exactly does Scary get to the Island?

How do you want things to go?
I intend on having the people tele'd to Yanille return with wizards and then have them assist. Could you have the Socialists join Tarqinder's group (the few which survived) and have the TzHaar group assist Kot-Tok with their Obsidian lava-firing tech. Do you intend on bringing a sealife army too? Because the battle scene is already crowded and Lathas does deserve the spotlight. He's killed Dancus so far, and how do you want your characters who you're killing off to die? I wish to write the ending though, and I want Lathas to seem in control of the battle (and winning it) from this point up until my later contribution. Mr. Garrison 16:33, 18 June 2008 (UTC)


 * As an offer, would you like me to act out your characters in VIA whilst you're away? And if it's okay with you, I'm planning to add a pizzazz to the article on the Kharzavores, i.e. starship types, some history etc. (just like with the Deathworms or with the Future Horrors). Oh, and I'm now an admin!

--Fegaxeyl 15:15, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

I will have the Tz Tok Jad be teleported away (or something similar). I'll leave room for you to kill your characters but I will not end the chapter. Could the TzHaar retreat for when the sealife army comes, because I don't want too much opposition for Lathas as it is meant to be his army taking the spotlight rather than others. Lathas will eventually be defeated but I do not wish to say how, but it will be quite unexpected, especially what happens to him! Mr. Garrison 16:09, 19 June 2008 (UTC)

Updates to the Kharzavore page
Evil Dude,

Here is the new Kharzavore image, part of what will happen to the page. I'd show you more - if I had created it. Anyway, I hope you will allow this onto the page, along with the new updates.

Bon voyage!

--Fegaxeyl 16:14, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

RS name
Yo Evil Dude,

If you are reading this, you are back from France. Great! How was your trip?

I was wondering what your RuneScape name is (your main account, if you have several) so we cn meet up some time if you want.

--Fegaxeyl 15:59, 24 June 2008 (UTC)

Chapter 25
Evil Dude,

So... do you want peace or war between the GDG and the Kharzavores? I'm not quite sure what the last chapter implied. Hopefully, if there was peace (even if it were temporary, before war in the story arc that would probably emerge towards the end of the RP) then I would be able to focus on my originally itended storyline with Bruce

By the way, what did you think of last night's Doctor Who episode? This is the second time I will use 1337 on the wiki: OMG! I loved it. The effects were great, Rose's gun was great, the Doctor was blasted through the chest (which was great), Gwen Cooper went insane (which was great), there were all those moons (which was great), and the Doctor spoke Judoon (which was great)! And the fact we didn't get a "Next Time..." left me shocked.

--Fegaxeyl 17:55, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

A problem with universes
'''Warning, this post contains spoilers. I intend only for The Evil Dude to read this. In fact, I shouldn't even be posting this.'''

I have found a problem with your "No Drauss" universe. You have it so that John Dixon dies in Peacekeepers. As a result, The Assassin would not know of his Death, and wouldn't be involved with Angeror in the first place because John wouldn't coax him from out of hiding.

In my universe, John lives in the R-SotD finale because The Assassin replaces John's regenerative energy with some of his own life energy. This means that the Death of John is not on his mind and, when it comes to the mind-battle, the spirits of John, Chris and Jenifer are not there to help him win.

My mesage is that The Assassin would, not having the spirit of John (who was not a victim of Angeror) loses the mind battle, and thus, Angeror wipes out the Kharzathingys etc.

Is there any possible way to change it?

My point was, the reason for The Assassin winning the mind-battle is having those friend's deaths on his mind. If Angeror had no influence on how they died, they would not appear and he would lose the battle, thus Angeror's World happens.

Gielinor
The Battle of Ardougne is over now, but you did not kill off your characters? Do you still want to kill them off? I understand if you've had a change of mind of course, and in the end it is totally up to you what you do with your characters. I'm only asking because I want you to know that it's still fine to add in your final bits. A "press release" for Volume 2 will occur either next week or the week after, and the new story arc may tie in with the sealife army... Mr. Garrison 18:48, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

Okay, and yes the economy crisis is well and truly over (at last!). Lathas has been stripped of his role and is now confined to West Ardougne to live his twisted life. Harmon Reeves has replaced him and now the world is rebuilding itself. As you can see at the end of "Battle..." Tarqinder and Mark are off to Varrock to rebuild, and their expedition will be the start of Volume Two.Thanks for helping keep the series running for as long as it has and the future for it looks good, as I can gaurantee a short but confirmed Volume Three which will put a whole new perspective on the characters. The new disaster will be revealed very soon and this time everyone everywhere is endangered (yes, from the reigning monarchs to the butterflies around Lumbridge Castle...) Mr. Garrison 11:15, 5 July 2008 (UTC)

Gielinor: Volume Two
Set two months after "The Battle of Ardougne", Gielinor continues its stories of the inhabitants of its world, and the various situations they come across. The world is rebuilding from the economy crisis, but is now beginning to get well and truly back up on its feet. Volume Two will consist of 30 chapters this time, and will feature many individual story arcs and new characters, but all will be linked to a new problem - one which will affect everyone everywhere. Gielinor is about to be hit by a freak condition dubbed "global warming", and the sea levels are flooding the Lumbridge Swamps slowly but surely, and storms are hitting Karamja with no concern over the many who lie dead in its wake. Volume Two will officially launch on July 17th/18th with chapter one being written by myself, but after you are welcome to add your own at will!
 * Mr. Garrison 19:28, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

Good idea, and by the way the whole "global warming" thing isn't me trying to preach - it's just me having been inspired by a Postbag From the Hedge about how many people burn logs and how the WOM (I think) said something about flooding and natural disasters. Economy crisis was inspired by all those players who are convinced the Grand Exchange is crashing the economy and that Jagex are manipulating it somehow (a la Lathas) - not my beliefs though. I'm not sure about what arcs could happen where, and I thought rising sea levels could link up with Sharkros who may plan to attack more inland areas or something. Any other arc ideas? I currently have plans for a Karamja story arc with Tarqinder and Mark which will introduce a new character. And yes, I have left the door open for Lathas to come back, and also I wanted to show how he felt when he found out Harmon was King (plus west Ardougne had been left out!) and I thought it would show what happened to him - give him an ending. I will confirm though that Lathas shan't be returning in Volumes Two or Three - though then again the format of Volume Three may suit a portrayal of him...but I won't reveal anything about Volume Three anytime soon!
 * Mr. Garrison 20:14, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

It begins....
As I may once again warn, this post contains spoilers.

Ok, the scare-crow is on the ZTI Island. I have mainly three suggestions for some interaction:


 * Scarecrow encounters the Gang's wood hut and destroys it, getting The Assassin's scent in the process.


 * He then encounters them on the walk to the ZTI crater and there is a battle.


 * Meets them in the crater when the Parallel Angeror breaks through and Spartacus reveals himself.

When I mentioned Parallel Angeror, I meant the new, demon Angeror from Angeror's World. I'm planning on a sort of convergance: Scarecrow, Posessed Spartacus and the Parallel Angeror all meeting at the same point, as a sort of finale.

Okay, but...
...don't end with half of RuneScape underwater (I'm sure you won't do that anyway though) and I want the actual freak weather and rising water dilemma to be the core problem, but I'm fine with Sharkros being evil and using water to help expand his empire, even if he has an evil way of doing it! This series will be looking good I think, and at least this time round we've actually got a rough plan of where things are going!
 * Mr. Garrison 16:56, 9 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Quick question, if Sharkros' armour moves on wheels, how will he get out of water (or will he remain in the depths for the series)?

Sure, no problem. I see your "key words" for season two, some very interesting choices - in particularly red mist, sea slugs and deaths! Plus, I'm shifting the premiere forward to 16/17 rather than 17/18, but the way things are looking it'll probably be the 17th anyway. Mr. Garrison 19:50, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Hi evil dude, chap 3 is reserved, and if you don't mind me asking, what is the red mist? PS If you'll tell me cover it with that blank text thing so it can only be read by hilighting it to prevent others reading what they might not want to. Mr. Garrison 21:50, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

I meant chapter three is reserved for you, bad wording on my behalf, apologies for any confusion. And I like the red mist idea! Reminiscent of a harpie bug swarm on Karamja (it's a slayer monster and a nuisance if you don't have the items to stop it), but these bugs are carnivores, and are they trapped in the sewers? And can anything stop them? Like slayer equipment or something? Mr. Garrison 16:11, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Hey Evil Dude. My first volume 2 story involves a huge horde of zombies hiding out in a vast cave system under the sea. Perhaps the villains from "Evil from the Depths" could be the zombies again. Unless of course, you have prior plans. Or if this is what you meant in the first place.

--Fegaxeyl 15:56, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Hi, could you change the whole exhaust pipe thing about Fort Avias, cos exhausts are more Industrial Revolution than medieval, plus wouldn't the Aviantese be in control via their powerful magic? And good job with Sharkros and the chapter as a whole! A nice little Davros reference and entrance, plus do you want me to slip in a hint for my first chapter about underwater activity on the increase because Tarq and Mark are going by boat to Karamja. It'd be something like eels circling the boat or the lobsters coming further inland. If I slip a reference in and you don't like it then tell me and I'll change it. Mr. Garrison 16:09, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

My bad on that one, sorry! I think I remember seeing exhausts somewhere in Keldagrim, but I think dwarven technology is quite Industrial Revolution, so I suppose that would make them more up to date than the humans themselves. I'm thinking of adding an extra five chapters, cos this volume is a lot busier and has much more complex story arcs. Tarqinder and Mark's Karamja arc will run for about three or four chapters and then I was thinking of doing something to do with Falador, as a new character I'm bringing in will be from there, plus Veedi is going on a very rough and violent journey which will take some horrible twists and add a very dark element to Volume Two. Plus, I think we can safely say that Sharkros is very much Volume Two's answer to Lathas. Mr. Garrison 16:21, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Just an idea, but what if Fort Avias was mysteriously suspended in the clouds using powerful magic, so it wouldn't require a long explanation or anything and might make it seem more god-like and majestic. It could be something like Armadyl crafted it to his own plans in the God Wars to give his Aviantese a hiding place, and later somewhere to watch over the world on Armadyl's behalf. just a suggestion. And is Sharkros hiding beneath Witchaven and instead of stealing planets (Davros) he is stealing people like the King of Falador as you mentioned, which would explain for his disappearence? Mr. Garrison 23:34, 18 July 2008 (UTC)

Runiverse Quiz
Evil Dude,

You might have noticed my "Runiverse Quiz". It's pretty simple - it's just a repository for loads of questions about the Runiverse. As the Runiverse's most prolific editor, I suppose you would enjoy adding some questions there. Tell me what you think!

--Fegaxeyl 09:09, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

Yes
Same as last year, but it depends how things work out with other folk's story arcs, but we'll deffinetely need to co-write the episodes leading up to it, and I must explain that Volumes Three & Four will take an extremely different path with the third volume running for about eight chapters which will be different in terms of style to anything done so far. I can guarantee that you'll be writing the last chapter though, and I might have a character or two to kill off as well. Mr. Garrison 10:45, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

Chap 15
Hi evil dude, I'm enjoying Evil From the Depths so far, and I take it that fisherman was the one from Veedi's Quest (or I'd like to think so anyway). For chapter 15 I was thinking we could do a mid-season cliffhanger such as a freak storm hitting Musa Point and then the sealife attacking, with a main character there at the time (possibly). Tarqinder and Mark could get involved in this chapter, but I have plans forthem to go elsewhere at the minute. Mr. Garrison 11:15, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

Can't say I have, but I came up with an idea of a subplot/idea on how the situation is for the sea creatures. In school, we did Animal Farm for a few months in late 07/early 08. Anyway, its basically a bunch of animals overthrowing their farmer in an animal rebellion lead by the pigs. The new pig leader however begins to act very cunning, and it ends with the pigs being the same as the farmers in how they treat the other animals. The idea is that the pigs became their own enemies, upright walking and running a farm which mistreated animals (it's also an entire parody of Stalin's Russia). Think of the sealife army as the animals, and Sharkros as the head pig and fisherman and other fish eaters as the farmers. With the sealife attacking, I was wondering if a sort of idea could come out that some of them feel they are becoming the enemy (i.e. they might house themselves in boats and buildings). Just a thought, but I thought it could add a whole new level to what's going on, and with Sharkros already a landweller it could also lead to other sea creatures questioning him. Just an idea, Mr. Garrison 19:59, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

The Rising Heat was brilliant! And poor old Kot-Tok, but at least he died a hero. I've got chapter 15 reserved for our mid-season cliffhanger (where disaster begins), and it would seem nearly everyone is linking with the Southern Sea for their stories, which is interesting. Plus, should we have Tarqinder and Mark encounter Farrell and Darako (ie start bringing characters together, or maybe not yet), but I know Toa, Jigo, Fegaxeyl and Ugozima will need to tie up their stories before we have a meet up (if we have one), and this volume is going to lead straight into Volumes Three and Four at the same time, but I'll reveal how at a later stage. Mr. Garrison 19:50, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

Okay, I've got two more chapters to do with them alone though first. Mr. Garrison 12:34, 23 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I know it's a bit of an odd request, but could you either alter or remove the Soviet Rellekka lines in "Evil from the Depths". Soviet Russia was run by a communist party, and communism is against the idea of classes and a structured society. Rellekka however has a chieftan, and having a chieftan kind of contradicts the idea of communism. Mr. Garrison 13:11, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

Peacekeepers
As I explained on it's talk page, I've revamped all of my chapters in R-Pk. Could you see if you have to adapt anything to suit my changes? Andrew 21:52, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

Re:Custom Bionicles:Location of the Final Battle
I know,this has nothing to do with RuneScape Fan Fiction,but I didn't want anybody @ Custom Bionicles to know yet.

I have created an idea for where the Final Battle might take place:The Tower of Destiny.

Image: towerofdestiny.jpg

More info to come soon.

 Seth   01:33, 24 July 2008 (UTC)

Sea Life Army


Evil Dude,

Last night I did a quick sketch. It's not great, but in the mean time it's a darn good image of a small platoon of the Sea Life Army. You might want to use it in an upcoming episode of Gielinor, or maybe the Sea Life Army article. Either way, enjoy!

And if you want another, larger image, just tell me.

--Fegaxeyl 08:27, 25 July 2008 (UTC)

Blocks Required
Hi, Evil Dude.

I am needing a Sysop to block some accounts, the list is on Sannse's user talk (User talk:Sannse).

He is vandalizing again and again, check the message Sannse left there for info.

Thanks!

20:11, 25 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you for blocking those accounts. You should turn off anon only for the IPs so that they can't create more accounts on other wikis and use them here.  I also suggest that you change Thisguyown's block to infinite, as it's currently only at one week.  I am an editor on the main RuneScape Wiki and am using this IP because I do not want the vandals to know my identity.  Thanks in advance. 24.66.94.141 17:36, 26 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you. 24.66.94.141 19:18, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

The Red Mist
Hi, TED. I just wanted to say I'm going to make a short, but neccesary reference to the Red Mist in my chapter, Revival's Road. The reason why I must reference it simply because the Red Mist has enveloped Dancus' home in Varrock. Just giving you a friendly heads-up! 19:56, 27 July 2008 (UTC)

Claws of Sharkros
Please don't begin writing these yet, as I want all the characters present, and which god is going on the loose? Plus we need a few chapters for Fegaxeyl's idea of a volcano erupting on Crandor and launching ash into the skies. Mr. Garrison 13:01, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Is it the Shadow by any chance? Or a certain god who is linked to Juna the Serpent? Plus I want the volcanic eruption to affect all stories after it (maybe a chance for the landwellers to be weakened for the sea life army's attack) but please don't have the god just running around crushing every single location with its giant foot (a la Abbadon). By the way did you see "Music of the Spheres" yesterday? Mr. Garrison 13:26, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

PS. In my reserved chapter I was thinking of maybe Tarqinder and Mark meeting Tony and then possibly helping to finish off the red mist (unless you have other plans) or I could have them trapped on a charter ship to Ardougne which is assaulted by a group of angry eels and crabs. Your thoughts? Mr. Garrison 13:34, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Okay, but the actual storm won't feature them because anyone caught in its path will be killed, could we develop the idea of eels attacking a charter ship (ie know your enemy) and soon I want to have Tarqinder realise what is actually going on, plus for Fegaxeyl's volcano idea I was thinking of a chapter in which Tarqinder realises the true danger only for him to discover hundreds of people around Falador burning fires as part of a celebration or something similar. By the way, 35 chapters isn't a limit, it's more of a starting point (ie no less but possibly more) and also I've dropped a few hints in about disaster in "Entering the Cave" and am in the final stages of planing storm. As we're co-writing I thought you could use it as a chance to focus on how Sharkros plans on using storms as a chance to attack and possibly a few parts focusing on Lumbridge Swamp's flooding. Plus, new main character about to appear in "Entering the Cave". Mr. Garrison 16:53, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

I thought we could save the killer whales and big beasties for the finale, and Sharkros is a cunning leader, so he won't want to send the main troops in just yet. And global warming is happening because people have been cutting down lots of trees and building a lot more and burning a lot more logs, plus Gielinor is also having a bit of a bad weather period which doesn't help the chances of clearer weather, and Sharkros has stepped up the global warming a bit, and this volcano will cause even more problems. Mr. Garrison 17:15, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

I'll have "Entering..." finished by tonight and then we can begin work on "Storm" and then the chapter with the eel attack and then we can start tieing everyone's arcs up and have everyone converge on Falador (sans Farrell and Darako who are fighting the Mist) only for Crandor's volcano to erupt and begin a time of darkness where the sealife army launch an attack. Mr. Garrison 20:09, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

PS: Could you remove the yank and hobo form Madphibian's hallucinations, someone could take those words a bit offensively and there's no America in RuneScape yet (except for the servers, that is). Mr. Garrison 20:27, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Three points
Evil Dude,

There are a few things that I think you might want to know.


 * 1) In Cabin Fever, I've added a possible cause for the Sea Life Army's origin, although in the story this is speculative and therefore disprovable by you.
 * 2) Are you sure you want two stories right next to each other? Although we might get more story slots, having two next to each other, both with important implications means that the rest of us editors will have trouble giving our characters time to react.
 * 3) If Sharkros is unknown, how come King Roald swears by his name?

That's all for now!

--Fegaxeyl 08:33, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Friends Reunited
In the next scene, I thought Sir Raef could mention that the King of Ardougne is still at his rightful throne, so that the three who know him would go to warn him and perhaps save him. They then go to Port Sarim and pay for a charter ship (Sir Raef's boat is not quick enough and is more at risk from attack) to Ardougne (or Witchaven). I'm putting in an explanation that they can't teleport (law runes are costly and only skilled wizards can teleport) and so they must board the charter ship. On board, the eels will attack them and as its a charter ship it won't simply be sinking a little vessel but could involve some bad tempered crustaceans pursuing the group into the captain's room which can also give a chance to question the situation. I pan for Tarqinder and Tony to kill the creatures (a big sword and a powerful whip are quite powerful combined) and then Sir Raef can sail them to Ardougne. Then they rush to the Palace to meet King Harmon who is giving a public announcement (with him being the only leader logical enough to realise what is going on with global warming). His revelations can make the cliffhanger. Phew, that was a long message....What do you think? And Darako's death actually sent a chill down my spine, but I've figured out Farrell's fate cos of his appearence listings! Mr. Garrison 17:25, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, "Silence in the Library"/"Forest of the Dead", a good story which sets up some interesting stuff for series five when Moffett takes over (I'm still wondering who River Song is, I have a few ideas who she is though), the death works for Who and it works for this, and I believe that Farrell is going to blow up all the insects, but somehow be healed by magic or escape by luck (or perhaps he is captured by a certain army of the deep seas). Or are there other types of mist (a la Nanogenes rather than Vashta Nerdada?), but I think he'll live judging by comments you made months ago about killing one of the two off. Plus, have you read the tragic "The Hunter's Tale"? You could say it's a taste of things to come, and not in this volume... Mr. Garrison 18:35, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

You're not making King Roald a villain are you? It's just with Lathas we've kind of had the evil ruler, unless of course Roald is being brainwashed, but I need him for future volumes (especially five as I have a fair few ideas that require him). Mr. Garrison 11:57, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Ah, I see, so Sharkros is capturing and replacing leaders but under his control? Good idea, I like strategic villains! Anything you wish to add to "Friends Reunited"? I'm gonna start work on "Revelations" now, which will reveal the global warming from Harmon. It's a ibt of a dialogue-heavy episode, so maybe some bits with Sharkros and Lobstorr on their newly captured fort at Musa Point would fit in well. Plus, you're welcome to write or rewrite any of Tony's parts to how you want. Mr. Garrison 16:28, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Might I ask what leaders you wish to kill? And Sir Amik is wrapped up in a plot with Ugozima, but I could try and get Amik's rogue behaviour to be something controlled by Sharkros as I also want Sir Vyvin revived. Mr. Garrison 16:35, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

So he's only brainwashed Roald (to an extent) as he was a bit of a fighter towards Sharkros. I have no problem with the others dying, but you know Tutorial Island was scrapped from the game a few weeks back? It's been replaced by a starter quest called "Learning the Ropes" (there's some info on the main wiki). And as of Monday, TzTok-Jad is No. 2 as a monster (which you can't attack but it can attack you) named a spirit beast at lvl 712 was released with the quest "Spirit of Summer", and once again there's some stuff on the wiki. So how about instead of Tutorial Island you could possibly use Kumthalatta (I was going to kill him off when Tai Bwo Wannai was to be attacked, but maybe he could die more heroically if he somehow stands up to Sharkros or does something). All I ask is that I write Kumthalatta's death scene. Mr. Garrison 16:51, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Rejoice! The news says there was deffinetely water on Mars, it's been discovered today! On another sci-fi note, after Volume Two I was thinking of a project to do on Doctor Who Fan Fiction Wiki, I've only done a bit here and there, but I was thinking of a more collaberative project, and then we could have some thinking time for Volume Three which has a premise I will explain at the end of 2.35 to all the writers. "Beings of the Marsh" has a chilling opening, and I take it Roald's brainwashing has got him in lead into an obsession with Guthix, and now Guthix's followers have awoken, do I detect a link to Juna? Tears of Guthix would seem most relevant... Mr. Garrison 18:18, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, a "series 4.5". Have you seen the picture of the new type of Cyberman? I don't usually look up spoilers but I couldn't resist...it's very wierd indeed! I'll start Revelations tomorrow, and I take it the creatures seen in "Beings of the Marsh" are thought-to-be-extinct (like Aviantese), as one seems like what the Kalphites evolved from and I know it isn't one, but one did come across very much like a dragonkin. I was wondering where the attacks would take place at in the finale, cos its obvious that we can't fit every character in one place fighting. I was gonna have Tarqinder and Tony maybe helping Harmon at Witchaven while Raef and Mark teleport to Falador where they could meet a grieving Farrell. Fegaxeyl mentioned teaming up with Ugozima's character only referred to as "Master" at Hemenster, and I believe Dancus might be meeting Tarqinder. As for Jigo's Jake and Toa's Stan Charles, I'm not sure, but I'm sure they'll fit in somewhere. I thought the two main sights of attack would be Port Sarim and Witchaven (sea slug central and a great big fishing spot near Musa Point). We can start getting characters to meet up soon, plus I think a lot of characters have died this season, but will Sharkros ever return? And is this it for the sea life army? I also wondered how Guthix would arrive on Gielinor, perhaps through possession of somenoe ie. Roald or a random druid in Taverley... Mr. Garrison 21:22, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Evil dude, on the RuneScape main page the new August behind the scenes has announced a look into the first age during a quest (should be on RuneScape wiki now as well) which will look at the first people and such. The entities in Beings of the Marsh, could the explanation of them be changed from the earliest evolved creatures to something like "manifestations of Guthix" as I have no idea what the quest is going to reveal in terms of continuity. Also, I think we'd better start planning out the finale, but I do suggest that we don't have everyone meet up, because bear in mind Catherby is not in a good state and not many characters are good with teleportation. So could I suggest we have separate battles that are all part of the attempted invasion as I mentioned above. Besides, about 20 characters running around Lumbridge would really limit dialogue and plot. Your thoughts? Mr. Garrison 19:14, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

Ah, then no that wouldn't cause a continuity issue. At a later point we can enquire into what "group" each writer wants to involve their character with. Mr. Garrison 19:51, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

Yes, and would you like to help co-write a chapter with Ugozima named "A Helping Hand". It will have Tarqinder and Tony heading to Hemenster to warn its citizens about the oncoming attack. There they will meet up with Dancus who will hopefully return to full life in the chapter. I don't want to begin writing Night of the Sea Slug, as other writers need to catch up and may wish to use some chapters to finish up their arcs as sub-plots in the chapters. Mr. Garrison 15:19, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Hi evil dude. Rather than getting yuo to remove and delete a lot of Beings of the Marsh which isn't very Gielinor-ish, I have a different proposition for you. I've mentioned it to Ugozima and it is a new series called Gielinor Uncut. Basically, this series is a sister-series to Gielinor but it is not in the same continuity, and plus, it can have anything this time; and I won't change a word of it. The chapter Beings of the Marsh and the idea of the Swamp Entities comes across as something that could be portrayed better in this sister series, if you are willing to do so. It would also create a valuable spot to develop on some things that Toa and Jigo will need to add as they have limited time on the wiki. I know it is not the most ideal thing to ask, but I believe this would genuinely be portrayed stronger in this new series as it would not be as controlled as it is in the main series. However, I have no problem with Guthix making an appearence over the skies of Gielinor in the finale. Mr. Garrison 15:44, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Okay, and I sent a message earlier that we can co-write (just above the last message). Are you sure you don't want Beings of the Marsh as an uncut story? And how would you feel about heading the project while still working on the main series? Mr. Garrison 17:42, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

What I'm trying to say is that I'm not sure the Swamp Entities will work as strong in this series, as they break a number of continuity issues. I like them how they are, and do not like to see original ideas such as this changed as I have caused a number of clever ideas (many being your ideas) altered and fiddled with in the past thus breaking the creative drive. So why not keep them how they are in the sister series where they can do as they wish without me saying "remove this, remove that!" and damaging the creativity of them. This is what Gielinor Uncut is, a series that I won't write or interfere with, so I can't even get you to change the slightest thing, while still keeping Gielinor authentic enough to be part of a present day RuneScape world (plus 5-6 years). I'm glad you've taken up the role of lead writer, and I shall post up the series' page in about two weeks or so. Mr. Garrison 12:32, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

The quest "Meeting History" (a sequel to "Making History") allows the player to time travel to the First Age! And it revealed humans came to Gielinor after Guthix allowed them entry through a portal. Wierd, huh? Mr. Garrison 17:49, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Stranded Solution
While the contents of this post are a question, the subject matter may act as a spoiler towards future fan fiction.

Ok, a little spoiler before this question. At the end of R-VIA, The Immortal Gang take control of the island (which I will name) and thus have control over the portals. The Assassin is facinated by these portals and tries to use them in a safe way.

I'm assuming that Drauss is still in our universe (mainly cause I can't remember). My plan is that at the end of Stranded (or the middle, see later) a portal opens up to the time period Drauss is stuck in. Two things could happen:


 * Drauss goes through the portal, returning to the present (best suited for the finale.)
 * Drauss refuses because of a certain scenario (the middle of the series or a finale.)

This could, in real life, add another link from Planet of the Lost to TF and TW.

Andrew 19:51, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

Okay
But I am not keen on you adding a character who is based on your RuneScape account unless you were to change his name from Kroak1230 to simply Kroak or something similar, and would request you move the Swamp Entities to Gielinor Uncut. Reading on the latest time-travel quest, it was shown Guthix didn't create the world and life, he merely shaped it and allowed other life forms inlcuding humans to enter via the World Gate. This would contradict Guthix creating prototypes and such, as it would now seem he only manipulated Gielinor to suit his liking in terms of scenery, before fleeing in the God Wars. He was also portrayed as a shade-like creature in the quest that was nothing like a god, more of a living humanoid or solid entity. Sorry about this, but it was a very odd change to the game's continuity, and the First Age page on the RuneScape wiki has gone under a rewrite as well as Guthix's. Besides, in Uncut Guthix can be changed to suit your story arcs where in this series I wish for him to remain close to his RuneScape counterpart. By the way, I added a forum discussion on Gielinor Uncut, and I've listed you as head writer. As soon as I get a page ready I'll hand it to you. Mr. Garrison 22:07, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

I'm glad you're happy to be head writer, as during volumes three and four Uncut will basically take centre stage as far as I know. I look forward to see how well it works out, and am confident having an experienced writer leading it (not just experienced at Gielinor but other serials), and hopefully maybe some lesser known editors could step up and contribute. I know Fegaxeyl is writing (though you've porbably seen that on the forums). By the way, I have a few tantalising hints about upcoming Doctor Who (2009) plus a title for xmas (or so I think). If oyu wnat to know I'll add them but covered up so not to spoil for other users who watch. Next year should be very impressive though. Mr. Garrison 18:10, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

Here in old London town there's a few good comic stores which my dad gets some bits from, and the shop owner is very good at finding stuff out, and he says he knows it's for certain, the following information. And a quick note, Russell T Davies is secretly in with Outpost Gallifrey, and for every spoiler published, two red herrings are documented, though this shouldn't be the case. And the Sun spoiled The Stolen Earth way back in September, it announced Daleks, Davros and returning cast. Here is the info:

The Christmas special is either titled "The Other Doctor" or "The One Doctor" and is based on an audio play of the same named. Christmas Eve, 1851, a man posing as the Doctor (played by David Morrissey) is being paid good money to fight off deadly monsters that he himself has secretly created: fake Cybermen (the bronze faction). Meanwhile, the Tenth Doctor arrives, and not long after the real Cybermen begin a massive attack on London (the silver ones). Should have an appearence by Florence Nightingale as well. Companions: an urchin (lame child actor) and a maid (played by Velile Tshabalala). There's also a villain called Ms. Hartigan played by Dervla Kirwan who I think is the fake Doctor's companion.


 * Special No. 1: airs at Easter.
 * Special 2: June/July|}
 * Special 3: Possibly September|}
 * Special 4: December (Xmas special)

2009 features the return of the Sea Devils (at last, shame Ice Warriors aren't showing up yet), the Master (played by John Simm - he was originally set to cameo in Journey's End, but they gave him a whole episode. He didn't regenerate, same mental Master which is good), Jenny and possibly Paul McGann playing the Eighth Doctor if contracts with Fox can be sorted out as they techincally own the 8th Doctor because of the TV Movie. Brian Blessed may also be appearing as a guest star. With the 8th Doctor that opens possibilities of a Time War episode which will either be really good or really lame, possibly the latter one though.

For 2010, Tennant is probably going to stay on, and it is set to feature River Song and Winston Churchill, plus an episode set in an Indian desert with soldiers (according to Doxctor Who magazine's production notes). Moffett said he doesn't want any classic things, however, he has apparently been heard mentioning something like "They're back!", but whatever they are is yet to be seen.

Any mentions about spoilers I ask that you cover over, and I ask you don't tell me any spoilers as this is all I want to know for now. It's good stuff though, huh? Mr. Garrison 18:38, 11 August 2008 (UTC)

Bureaucrat
I have nominated you for Bureaucrat Status here. I hope you accept my proposal. Good Luck!

Andrew 13:53, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

The point of Revenge of the Alone Ones is that if Angeror won, he could re-open the void. The Angeror's World scenario explores what would happen is Angeror beat The Assassin, how he would move from pure chaotica to insane, slave-whipping tyrant. The Soul Army is like his force, his guard, his law-enforcers. Angeror himself will only appear in his three forms in the finale, and then he'll be incarcerated and locked away.

Oh, and John in the excerpt is John Dixon, but I'll explain that when the time comes.

Andrew 19:05, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Ok, erm, I'll have to alter it so that the Scarecrow identity manages to escape at the last minute, and then your fate occours upon him.

Andrew 19:45, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Am I right when I guess that the big, surprise enemy of R-VIA is the Daleks? (If you can, write your next chapter about the confrontation between The Assassin and Scarecrow. Let Assassin reason with it and question it.) Andrew 12:36, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

It has arrived
I've added Gielinor Uncut, and now I'm handing over to you. Good luck and enjoy! Mr. Garrison 08:49, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

Hey, TED. I know this is sudden and all, but I've decided to do an about take: I now want to be part of GU. I now know that it would allow me to do stuff I really wanted to do with Dancus way, way, way back in the beginning of Gielinor. So... accept or deny. 11:09, 18 August 2008 (UTC)


 * 1) Like the idea of Metallian
 * 2) Fally Parade will be continued into Night of the Sea Slug (which will explain why all writers are editing that chapter)
 * 3) May I request that Guthix appears only briefly, as it will take away the effect of him appearing if he is present for a long time. Plus can it be left on a note where it can't be known for sure whether it was the real Guthix or just a manifestation, just like the Beast in "The Satan Pit".


 * Mr. Garrison 17:28, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

Okay, but I really don't want it to end up with Guthix appearing on top of the world to everyone and solving all the problems. Like King Harmon said, this volume people are going to stand up on their feet. Mr. Garrison 17:48, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

Gielinor Uncut
Evil Dude,

I will be taking part in GU, but first could you answer these questions:
 * When is it set, as in which year?
 * Will it be occupying a single continuity or several different ones that are linked together (like a massive TW)?
 * Will the continuity/ies be based on a single reversed decision (a Counterfactual or lots of different ones or the emergence of a new set of characters Alternate History?

My first episode will be called Gielinoir (Gielinor + noir, as in French for black) and will have an authoritarian Isdafar-Asgarnian-Kandarin bloc (if it's in multiple different universes) vs. a corporatist Misthalin-Karamja-Kharidian bloc. If it's one universe, this could be accomodated by having the White Knights really truly evil and having staged a coup in an earlier history, with Amik Varze as the Dictator or whatever title he wants.

--Fegaxeyl 13:21, 19 August 2008 (UTC)

PS Look up any unfamiliar terms on wikipedia or the rest of the net.

Hi evil dude, could you change the Metallian encounter to a different character as Tarqinder has things to do in that church which will explain why there aren't any sea slugs at Ardougne. Mr. Garrison 10:33, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

Could you not have Metallian become a central character and appear perhaps later on (ie. Chapter 31 or 32) as things are becoming slightly crowded, with lines becoming very few between characters and events needing to be rushed at times. Metallian can still appear but please don't have it in Night of the Sea Slug, things are already too packed. Mr. Garrison 11:48, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

I'd appreciate it if you'd remove the sections that I originally wrote for NoTSS that you cut-pasted into your spolier blog. I really don't like seeing my content on your spoiler blog. 15:18, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

Thanks :), I just thought things were a bit hectic, and Metallian would have much of his stuff rushed in that chapter, so a later point would make things much easier to work on. I'm really considering an increase to 36-38 chapters as there could be a few parts that run over. We'll see how it goes, but should things begin to get too rushed then another two or three chapters should help flesh things out. By the way, how would you feel about writing Mother Mallum in at the end of this chapter? (unless you're keeping her for later, I know you've seeded her throughout). Mr. Garrison 16:45, 20 August 2008 (UTC)

Thanks!
I've had a really great day today. I got the Pirates of the Carribean Trilogy on DVD, The Simpsons Movie and three books. Me and my family went to the Imperial War Museum North (near the Lowry Centre in Manchester). It was amazing. Then we went shopping (you know what women are like.....)

Don't tell JaGex (because,If we find any evidence, blah de blah), I'm 12 today. I'm the youngest in my year, and nearly the biggest in my class, although everyone in Year 7's a bit short.

Andrew 21:53, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Hey evil dude, how's Gielinor Uncut going? I thought I'd tell you now that as I've got first year of GCSEs coming up I duno how active I'll be for a while. This means that Volume Three has been cut down to a very short ammount of stories and Volume Four is having an overall strand. It also means that Gielinor Uncut can serve as the main attraction (really rubbish way of putting it I know), but I'm going to add an epic Volume Five next year (probably February or March), and after that I'll see how things go. Plus I'm thinking of a comedic series for the wiki as I am an editor on UnRuneScape (but I can't add anything from there to here, it'd be a nightmare) and I'm developing plans for a short series on Doctor Who Fanon. Mr. Garrison 22:50, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Is this your second year of coursework? I'm just starting, but teachers say they're doing ISAs only now instead of the coursework so I can't be sure what's going on. I'm hoping to finish Volume Two before I go back to school. Mr. Garrison 09:13, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

Just starting GCSE two-year course, same here. I can't even get SATs results until the new term for my school needs to "assess" them. When Guthix appears, rather than a skull appearing, what do you think of a more "hands on" Guthix (quite literally), and as he is a shape shifter would you prefer him to appear as the green robed apparition he appears like in "Meeting History", or do you want to stick with the skull? And read this page on RuneScape wiki, pay attention to the second-to-last paragraph. Mr. Garrison 16:26, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

True, plus the gren robes are probably his mortal body (ie. his human disguise). Did you read the Portal of Life? Image if it was to open in something like a roleplay - the ultimate anomaly. It says it would open to all different realities, even Earth, parallel Earths, parallel Gielinors, alien worlds, future Earth, past Earth you name it! Everything would crash into one á la "Turn Left". As for the SATs I refuse to acknowledge my results, especially after they paid waitresses to mark them. Gives me an idea, nobody's ever seen the RuneScape school properly apart from Mr. Morduat; maybe an idea for Volume Three (trust me, it would work for Volume Three despite its set-up). I'm naming the next chapter "Defending the Kingdom" and am going to have this as a synopsis:

''Sir Raef takes the throne of Ardougne and makes his way to Keldagrim to stop the burning of coal. Tarqinder and Mark go in search of Sharkros and Lobstorr in an attempt to make peace, but discover what lies below the sea. Alliances are made and now all the cities and towns fear the sea slugs and the ash which is getting ever closer while the Wizards' Guild try to hold back the debris of the eruption at any cost...''

Which leads me to my next request, would it be possible for Tarqinder and Mark to witness what is happening below the seas by Lobstorr showing them but risking his own life. It's up to you though. And I'd like to pose the Volume's questions in this chapter: Is it ethical to wipe out life on land? Or is it just the same as humans killing and eating the sea life? And does it make them as bad as the sea life army (and vice-versa)? Mr. Garrison 17:00, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

It's not about the volcano, but it'll be eight chapters long and will have no story arc. Volume Four however, let's just say it'll be one central character and will turn the series upside-down. A volume five (and maybe six) I can guarantee. Mr. Garrison 17:55, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

I usually get things on DVD, London cinemas are always packed, especially where I am with Canary Wharf and the O 2  Arena in close proximation. I live very close to Canary Wharf (or Torchwood Tower) as well as where Captain Jack drops the Chula bomb at Limehouse station. And the Racnoss base isn't too far either... Mr. Garrison 18:06, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

David Tennant expressed interest in playing The Riddler in a future Batman film. Mr. Garrison 18:22, 22 August 2008 (UTC)

Thanks
I've been meaning to write an Economy Crash article for ages. I've added chapter 32 as Silence of the Seas, it would feature everything becoming unusually quiet after the sea life appear on every coast in Misthalin, Asgarnia and Kandarin (and Karamja) in Defending Kingdoms. At the end I thought it could be a good oppurtunity for Sharkros to strike and reveal himself in the Claws of Sharkros. Can I ask, when Sharkros met the Oracles of Zamorak did they smith him a metal case (ie. like making armour) and granted him the gift of shooting the electricity from his hand? Also, I really do ask that you don't write The Oceanic Empire and Claws of Sharkros as The Stolen Earth/Journey's End, as there's already been a few Whoniverse-ish parts such as Fort Avias (Valliant), Red Mist (Vashta Nerada), Madphibian (Dalek Caan), TzHaar (Sontarans, very slightly) and Sharkros. I know they're not crossovers, but please try and turn it down a bit. We can begin work on Defending Kingdoms and other chapters once Toa finishes up "On the Run" and "Undercover in Falador". Mr. Garrison 18:56, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Okay, and yeah, it was TzHaar-Ha! and "military wisdom" which made me think Sontaran. I don't mind them it's just anymore and things might become such a way that nothing new gets created and everything is based off everything else. I'm currently redesigning the template for Gielinor, as Ugozima mentioned before how it is taking up a lot of room, something I knew would end up happening a while ago. So as I did for Morytania (though it wasn't necessary for it) I'm making a separate chapters template. Mr. Garrison 19:11, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

I'm also adding the Artwork from Gielinor page which will display all the artwork which remains mainly unseen in chapters (such as Fegaxeyl's illustration in "Summit"), plus another place to show off character iamges. Mr. Garrison 19:20, 25 August 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, another quick message, I see there's a red link to lava launcher (hint, hint, it'd be seen clearer now). Plus it might be good to add another few pages on 1) freak weather and 2) the battle between Sharkros' army and humanity. Now, I've got to start changing all chapters so they'll show the Gielinor chapters template... Mr. Garrison 19:26, 25 August 2008 (UTC) PS. Is it possible to remove the Zezima reference from Fear of the Red Mist (I'm a bit against naming individual players) and changing Indiana Jones music to action music (4th wall breaking thing). Sorry, I'm a bother.

Is it possible for me to write a meeting between Tarqinder, Tony, Mark and Sharkros? I'm not sure what to do with their plots at the minute. And I've just seen about "codes" being used for Fort Avias, could it become a "protocol of Armadyl" rather than a code? Mr. Garrison 11:47, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

I've done a re-write below of the description of Fort Avias to make it more dramatic and godly, and I really want to stray away from the idea of floating base (aka Valiant) and make it sound more godly, as if Armadyl had crafted it himself. Plus, it gives an explanation of why the Aviantese could not help against Lathas, but can aid the fighting against Sharkros:

''Fort Avias was a floating fort which watched the world from the sky, it was made from the most ancient of stone which had come from the First Age itself. At the end of the God Wars, the few surviving Aviantese had fled, and Armadyl looked upon his followers with sympathy, and with godly magic crafted them a home, hidden in the clouds high above the realm of Gielinor. The fort was armed, as one of the Aviantese had visited the ruins in Ardougne in the dead of night to inspect the broken world, and salvaged lava launching weapons to use for the fort in case of attack which threatened the world. The lava launchers had been powered by godly magic, and had now been crafted into both handheld cannons and larger cannons which were mounted upon the ancient stones of Armadyl himself. The remaining Aviantese were limited in their action, and they were only awoken from their silence when godly power threatened the world, in which case they could interfere.''

I know its your story and I wish not to interfere, but I think it would make the idea of Fort Avias arriving sound a lot more dramatic for the finale, and would come across as something that suggests Sharkros is a lot more powerful than the Zamorakian Army. Mr. Garrison 12:07, 27 August 2008 (UTC)