User talk:Nat12345919

Hi, welcome to RuneScape Fan Fiction Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the The Hundred Year War page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Ugozima (Talk) 01:45, July 5, 2009

11:55, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

Concerning Hundred Year War
Hey! Here's just a tip for Hundred Year War;

You need to add a space between each paragraph, or put a : in front of it.

(1):

Tom walked down the road. He waved to a group of lumberjacks as he whistled a merry tune.

A lumberjack suddenly turned and launched his axe into Tom's head. He turned to his comrades, "We're havin' noob tonight!"

(2):
 * Tomwalked down the road. He waved to a group of lumberjacks as he whistled a merry tune.
 * A lumberjack suddenly turned and launched his axe into Tom's head. He turned to his comrades, "We're havin' noob tonight!"

Or it will come out looking like this, as yours does right now;

Tomwalked down the road. He waved to a group of lumberjacks as he whistled a merry tune. A lumberjack suddenly turned and launched his axe into Tom's head. He turned to his comrades, "We're havin' noob tonight!"

So yeah, put either spaces between the paragraphs, or use :'s to make the story readable and not just one huge block of text. ;)

Berus 01:59, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

PS: I demand more story plox.

PSS: And a cookie would be nice.