Talk:Crystal dragon

So, why did whoever created this page rush the grammar to such an extent, and can I please correct it?

Here's an example with mistakes bolded.

"After the The Forgotten Cavern update, there was a bug that caused the dragon always to max hit. Instead of showing the max hit,, it showed a part of the max hit damage variable in Java code which was hit.crystal_dragon.range all over the damage splash (sometimes there was fire or crush instead of the range). Upon taking this much damage, the victim would have all his stats to 0. Instead of dieing, the player would have null/* HP (*is the player's HP level, It did not show a '0', it showed 'null'). She/He and was unable to regenerate. Engaging in combat with these stat and taking 0 damage could still kill you. This had since been one of the most dangerous bugs in runescape. It has been fixed about 3 and a half hours later. If you ate any food or other HP boosting things,while having 'null' HP you would have died too. "

Karshí 20:22, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm glad that there has been some effort to improve the article, but the state it's in is still dire. Karshí 19:04, June 18, 2010 (UTC)